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I had to write statements and complaints without having any examples or guidance how to do this. It made my life way more difficult and caused a lot of necessary stress. Here is a few key important lessons I learned.


#You can attach only 10 attachments. So, you can choose to combine several attachments into one, or send it by email after you receive complaint number.
== Steps for a complaint ==
#Be mindful that system might have some technical issues especially on weekends. If you can, do not leave it for the last day.
In essence a complaint is a form of a statement where you put an emphasis on someone's wrong doing. Some of the steps listed below apply more to a complaint than a statement as it may be obvious for the statement, while this data needs to be researched for complaint. However, it makes sense to include this information into both.
#Relie on facts as much as you can. Provide evidence.
# Identify where to send complaint or statement. Address the organisation you contacting in your document.
#Use legal (neutral) language. State the misconduct you are complaining clearly. The problems you are complaining about may cause strong emotions. Have someone to check what you wrote. Too emotional language might cloud some facts as emotions, something you would like to avoid. May be easier said than done.
# Check for forms and templates. Often there will be predefined forms how to fill in the data.
More tips on [[How to write complaint/statement]].
# Be mindful of potential technical issues. For example support might not be available on weekends. If you can, do not leave it for the last day.
# Rely on facts as much as you can.  
# Provide evidence if you can or ways to get.
# Tell full story even if you can not back it by evidence.
# Use legal (neutral) language. State the misconduct you are complaining clearly. The problems you are complaining about may cause strong emotions. Have someone to check what you wrote. Too emotional language might cloud some facts as emotions, something you would like to avoid. May be easier said than done.
# Do not dial down accusations. Almost always organisation responding to your complaint/statement may only downgrade your accusations. So, if you downgraded to be polite appropriate response will not be considered.
# Provide basis for all your accusations. Ideally backed by hard evidence, but at lease by reliable reasoning.
# Group your document into logical manageable sections.
# Consider numbering your statements. It makes much easier to reference them later.
# Provide executive summary at the start.
# Highlight your key points at the end.
 
== Formatting a statement ==
I follow this structure if there is no structure given then follow it.
 
=== Title ===
As for any document I like title to tell exactly what document you have. Here is an example: "''2023-04-26 Dr Alfonsas Stonis further statement''".
# Date
# Name
# Purpose/content
 
=== Preamble ===
=== Main body ===
=== List of attachments ===
=== Signature ===
=== File format ===


== My examples ==
== My examples ==
Statements: 3 times for my [[2015-03-30 road traffic injury | personal injury claim]] and 2 while [[Ona Stonienė | seeking justice for my mom]].
Statements: 3 times for my [[2015-03-30 road traffic injury | personal injury claim]] and 2 while [[Ona Stonienė | seeking justice for my mom]].


Complaints: [[
Complaints:
 
== Examples ==
 
These are examples of statements and complaints prepared in relation to personal injury claims, legal representation, and complaints to regulatory bodies.
 
=== Statements ===
 
==== Personal injury statements ====
 
* [https://drive.google.com/open?id=1KY0E6KPCOMiupMBm26YKM-hbz6xacltu 2019-04-29 Alfonsas Stonis – Original Statement]
* [https://drive.google.com/open?id=1O6I1JlT_yi5rq59VxLUVdGB1qFyMmD5w 2019-04-29 Juste Stoniene – Original Statement]
* [https://drive.google.com/open?id=15eWQdVtXO5ocN_XztYRHhCvKY4AfGsBa 2022-06-23 Juste Stoniene – Further Statement]
* [https://drive.google.com/open?id=1LQiDe4IKBWNVoxR4fGrRXIh_DIXQVTs8 2022-06-27 Alfonsas Stonis – Further Statement]
* [https://drive.google.com/open?id=1FcKljggLoTgRifYPTTMv6oHPFtny6wV1 2023-03-20 Juste Stoniene – Gratuitous Past and Future Care Statement]
* [https://drive.google.com/open?id=1IucQI32C5N7jvIDkEG7p124QFEvtvWJO 2023-04-26 Alfonsas Stonis – Further Statement]
 
==== Supporting witness statements ====
 
The following statements are listed in the documentation of the PIC submission:
 
* [[Misrepresentation by Peter Livers|2023-04-20 Karin Rosen – Signed Statement]]
* [[Misrepresentation by Peter Livers|2023-04-21 Karl Nallin – Confirmation of Work]]
* [[Misrepresentation by Peter Livers|2023-04-23 Vygandas Kasiulevicius – Witness Statement]]
 
=== Complaints ===
 
==== Complaints to the Office of the NSW Legal Services Commissioner (OLSC) ====
 
* [[Complaint to OLSC about solicitor Moya de Luca-Leonard|Complaint about solicitor Moya de Luca-Leonard]]
* [[Complaint to OLSC about barrister Michelle Campbell|Complaint about barrister Michelle Campbell]]
* [[Misrepresentation by Peter Livers|Complaint about solicitor Peter James Livers – Misrepresentation]]
* [[2024-04-14 Complaint to OLSC about solicitor Timothy Ceballos|2024-04-14 Complaint about solicitor Timothy Ceballos]]
 
==== Complaints to other authorities ====
 
* [[2026-02-08 Ombudsman Complaint Cover Letter|2026-02-08 Complaint to the NSW Ombudsman – Cover Letter]]
 
== References ==
* https://www.aukstadvaris.lt/kaip-rasyti-pareiskima-policijai-ka-butina-nurodyti/
* https://www.nukentejusiems.lt/kaip-pranesti-ir-gauti-pagalba/
* https://bizpro.techinfus.com/lt/new-kak-napisat-zayavlenie-v-policiyu-sovety-yurista.html
* https://www.nukentejusiems.lt/iki18/kaip-pranesti-ir-gauti-pagalba/kaip-pranesti-apie-nusikaltima/

Latest revision as of 00:52, 6 November 2026

I had to write statements and complaints without having any examples or guidance how to do this. It made my life way more difficult and caused a lot of necessary stress. Here is a few key important lessons I learned.

Steps for a complaint

In essence a complaint is a form of a statement where you put an emphasis on someone's wrong doing. Some of the steps listed below apply more to a complaint than a statement as it may be obvious for the statement, while this data needs to be researched for complaint. However, it makes sense to include this information into both.

  1. Identify where to send complaint or statement. Address the organisation you contacting in your document.
  2. Check for forms and templates. Often there will be predefined forms how to fill in the data.
  3. Be mindful of potential technical issues. For example support might not be available on weekends. If you can, do not leave it for the last day.
  4. Rely on facts as much as you can.
  5. Provide evidence if you can or ways to get.
  6. Tell full story even if you can not back it by evidence.
  7. Use legal (neutral) language. State the misconduct you are complaining clearly. The problems you are complaining about may cause strong emotions. Have someone to check what you wrote. Too emotional language might cloud some facts as emotions, something you would like to avoid. May be easier said than done.
  8. Do not dial down accusations. Almost always organisation responding to your complaint/statement may only downgrade your accusations. So, if you downgraded to be polite appropriate response will not be considered.
  9. Provide basis for all your accusations. Ideally backed by hard evidence, but at lease by reliable reasoning.
  10. Group your document into logical manageable sections.
  11. Consider numbering your statements. It makes much easier to reference them later.
  12. Provide executive summary at the start.
  13. Highlight your key points at the end.

Formatting a statement

I follow this structure if there is no structure given then follow it.

Title

As for any document I like title to tell exactly what document you have. Here is an example: "2023-04-26 Dr Alfonsas Stonis further statement".

  1. Date
  2. Name
  3. Purpose/content

Preamble

Main body

List of attachments

Signature

File format

My examples

Statements: 3 times for my personal injury claim and 2 while seeking justice for my mom.

Complaints:

Examples

These are examples of statements and complaints prepared in relation to personal injury claims, legal representation, and complaints to regulatory bodies.

Statements

Personal injury statements

Supporting witness statements

The following statements are listed in the documentation of the PIC submission:

Complaints

Complaints to the Office of the NSW Legal Services Commissioner (OLSC)

Complaints to other authorities

References